Time Lapse Critique

[jthtiger]

Hey guys,

I created this short piece to show at the end of the sermon sunday. I'd be interested in getting your thoughts.

The description of the video talks about what the sermon was about.

CMN Player - YouTube - Oneness with Christ

-Tyler Herron

[[Admin] skstarkiller]

I like it, my one criticism is that Your text hugs the edge of the screen too tightly

[JoshGuerette]

Originally Posted by skstarkiller

I like it, my one criticism is that Your text hugs the edge of the screen too tightly

I agree, definitely not title-safe and a little distracting. I also would have changed the surface you built on, there's not enough contrast to draw the focus. Your eye just searches all over for what it's supposed to be looking at.

Good concept though and I liked that you did some zoom in post to change up a couple of the shots.

[jthtiger]

Originally Posted by JoshGuerette

I agree, definitely not title-safe and a little distracting. I also would have changed the surface you built on, there's not enough contrast to draw the focus. Your eye just searches all over for what it's supposed to be looking at.

Good concept though and I liked that you did some zoom in post to change up a couple of the shots.

I thought the title thing would be interesting at the time, but turned out not to work so well on the big screen.

And actually, I didn't do any of the zoom in post. That was all done during filming. We don't have a great camera, so any zooming done in post distorts the image too much.

Thanks for the feedback guys! Learning more and more everyday!
-Tyler Herron