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Originally Posted by brochris Interesting and helpful, or just plain annoying |
I found myself panting for breath at the end... Felt like you needed a little more dead time in the cuts. To be honest, it's interesting, but... Here's some things that grabbed my attention more than your message.
- change your background to something more interesting than an office.
- if you stick with the office (or not), experiment with lighting to separate you from the background (without casting harsh shadows)
- you stumbled on the lines every once in a while. Do take after take, until you nail it.