Critique Wanted

[Lucas]

Hey all,

I've done a bit of work for a young persons conference we want to hold at my church.

Just wanting some critique on a few GFX

THanks all.

[memcowboy]

I like them. IMHO, the logo looks a bit like a target. If that is the case, should the cross be the center of the target? Maybe with "One Life" written on the cross or maybe separated by the cross. Just a thought, although I am sure there are better artists on here that can judge better.

[rbcyouthdude]

reads kinda funny to me LOL. Really I like it

[tedanderson]

I like them. IMHO, the logo looks a bit like a target.

I was thinking more along the lines of the Looney Tunes cartoon endings where Porky Pig says, "That's all folks!"

[Ryanrhinkle]

check out creativemyk.com. they've got a critique section that will get you way more artists' opinions and less tech people's thoughts.

if you've already used it, cool. but if not, i'd add some kind of texture to the "target."

[jayr]

I like this concept.

To improve upon this, I would integrate the type better into the composition. It seems... as if it wasn't thought out like everything else. I would either create the type to stand out from the design, so that it has more focus. Or I would play with the type to integrate and fit in more with the overall design.

In my Typography class, we talked about variation of size! Think about that when you want to use type with image.

[ddavisdesign]

love the concept. But the colors (for me) arent uniform enough. Like so many colors my eyes dont know whats going on. I have to make out each shape and splatter because the colors arent relevant to eachother.