[stevegoad]

Well, the tag is too late to add (though I can see how it would be a nice touch). Even with my producer giving me "brother-in-law" rates, it would basically mean starting over...

As far as the guy alone (Dean) - I might have a chance to catch him in another setting for a contrasting shot... The only problem is, he really is a loner, and not one for giving "happy" expressions... so a contasting shot might be tough. But I do agree, that one scene is too long... just not exactly sure what to do yet (maybe at home holding his dog might give that "in his heart sometimes he cries" kind of mood...

Thanks for the idea.